Oh, What Fun: Revision Time

  Hello! I've made revisions to a paragraph from my short works essay on James Joyce's story "Eveline". Here I have posted an original, not-so-great paragraph and a revised, slightly-better version of the paragraph! Enjoy.

The original, not-so-great paragraph:

The ship, which Eveline plans to escape with Frank on, signifies Eveline’s opportunity of escape.  Frank, a sailor, had “…tales of distant countries…He told her the names of the ships he had been on and the names of the different services. He had sailed through the Straights of Magellan and he told her stories of the terrible Patagonians,” (Joyce 22). He intrigues Eveline with tales of foreign places; Eveline, too, wants to experience new things on her own. Eveline “was to go away with him by the night-boat to be his wife and to live with him in Buenos Ayres where he had a home waiting for her,” (Joyce 21). She finally makes her own decision: she plans to sail away on the ship and relocate to a foreign place. Eveline has the chance at a new life—one that doesn’t involve the familiarity of her home. However, when the time comes to make a final decision and board the ship, “She felt her cheek pale and cold and, out of a maze of distress, she prayed to God to direct her, to show her what was her duty. The boat blew a long, mournful whistle into the mist,” (Joyce 23). Eveline, unable to go through with her plan, does not escape to Buenos Ayres with Frank. Although given the opportunity to leave her familiar and unchanging life, Eveline chooses not to step onto the ship. Instead, she sticks to what she has known her entire life. 

The revised, slightly-better paragraph:

The ship, which Eveline plans to escape with Frank on, signifies Eveline’s opportunity of escape. Frank, a sailor, had “…tales of distant countries…He told her the names of the ships he had been on and the names of the different services. He had sailed through the Straights of Magellan and he told her stories of the terrible Patagonians,” (Joyce 22). He intrigues Eveline with tales of foreign places, which in turn encourages Eveline to want to experience new things on her own. She finally makes her own decision: she resolves to sail away on the ship and relocate to a foreign location. Eveline “was to go away with him by the night-boat to be his wife and to live with him in Buenos Ayres where he had a home waiting for her,” (Joyce 21).  Eveline’s chance at a new life doesn’t involve the familiarity of her home. However, when the time comes to make a final decision—board the ship to Buenos Ayres or stay put in familiar surroundings—Eveline desperately needs guidance, “She felt her cheek pale and cold and, out of a maze of distress, she prayed to God to direct her, to show her what was her duty. The boat blew a long, mournful whistle into the mist,” (Joyce 23).  Eveline retracts from her original plan and does not escape to Buenos Ayres with Frank. Although given the opportunity to leave her accustomed life, Eveline chooses against change. Instead, she sticks to what she has known her entire life. 

Ophelia Vs. Ophelia

    The actress portraying Ophelia in the first video presents her character in a bold way. In the video, when Laertes warns Ophelia about Hamlet's affections, "A violet in the youth of primy nature/Forward, not permanent, sweet, not lasting/The perfume and suppliance of a minute/No more," (1.3.8-10), the actress responds in an annoyed, almost sarcastic manner. In this way, Ophelia seems strong-willed and unwilling to listen to her father and brother. I don't agree with her approach at portraying Ophelia. This is the first scene that involves Ophelia, and her responses toward her father and brother's opinions should leave me unsure about what's really going on inside of her head. Instead, the scene left me with the thought that Ophelia had her mind set to disobey their advice and continue to see Hamlet. I imagine Ophelia's character as a softer woman whose intentions toward her relationship with Hamlet are unclear. 

    The actress in the second video portrays Ophelia as a quiet, conflicted young woman. I had to re-watch the scene to come to the conclusion that she barely speaks in the video. While her brother Laertes  lectures her to stay away from Hamlet, the actress meekly walks around him and avoids his gaze. Her facial expressions are troubled and give the impression that her brother's opinions do matter to her. I connect with the second actress's portrayal of Ophelia much more than the first. 

Hamlet: Oh the Angst

    I see Prince Hamlet in Shakespeare's Hamlet as a distressed and internally confused young man, unsure of how to act since the death of his father. He's conflicted between sadness and anger, and as a result lashes out at his mother and uncle.   

    As his uncle, and to-be stepfather, concludes his speech to the people as King of Denmark, Hamlet mutters, "'A little more than kin and less than kind,'" (1. 2. 67). Prince Hamlet's entrance exudes attitude; he can't help taking a jab at the new king. Although, who could blame him? Just two months after his father's death, Hamlet’s mother is already marrying his father's brother. I find the situation very twisted. 

    With the tenacity to criticize Hamlet's manliness, King Claudius says, "‘but to persever/In obstinate condolement is a course/Of impious stubbornness. 'Tis unmanly grief,'" (1. 2. 96-98). Not only does his father's death cause Hamlet major grief, but now Hamlet also has to deal with a controlling man trying to replace his father.

    Hamlet responds to his uncle and mother as an annoyed stepchild would—unwilling to subject to change and a bit cynical. Considering the situation, I understand where he's coming from. However, further into Scene 2, I saw that Hamlet's anger and sadness comes from a much deeper place,

"'Or that the Everlasting had not fixed/His canon 'gainst (self-slaughter!) O God, God/ How (weary,) stale, flat, and unprofitable/Seem to me all the uses of this world!'" (1. 1. 136-138). He wishes God had not made suicide a sin; otherwise he would take his own life. 

      I’m excited to find out more about Prince Hamlet, and to watch his character evolve throughout the play. Will Hamlet be in the same mindset at the end of the play? Will he turn out completely different than he did in the beginning of the play? 

I found a clip of Scene 2! Enjoy!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p2RHXt9t-d4

Symbolism of the Dust, the Old Photograph, and the Ship in James Joyce's "Eveline"

Symbolism of the Dust, the Old Photograph, and the Ship in James Joyce’s “Eveline”

In his short story "Eveline", James Joyce uses symbols—the dust, the old photograph, and the ship—to portray the self-imposed restrictions that limit not just his title character but also us from becoming individuals. Eveline  longs to escape from home, but relies on the past to stabilize her present, and depends on others to make decisions for her. When faced with the dilemma to either stay in Ireland or to leave for Buenos Aires with Frank, Eveline chooses to stick to the familiarity of her home. Joyce's symbolism represents the inner conflicts and self-imposed restrictions that young adults often face when on the verge of breaking into adulthood and essentially coming-of-age

In the beginning of “Eveline”, Joyce stresses the importance of dust through symbolism. The concept of dust symbolizes the layers of time that accumulated over the years.  Like dust, Eveline’s life has remained settled and unchanging, “She sat at the window watching the evening invade the avenue. Her head was leaned against the window curtains and in her nostrils was the odor of dusty cretonne. She was tired," (Joyce 20). The dust in Eveline’s house reminds her of all that’s gone, because while she stays put in the house, others have either died or moved away. The dust consistently collects in parts of her home, but instead of dusting the particles away, Eveline chooses not to because the odor has become so familiar, "Home! She looked round the room, reviewing all its familiar objects which she had dusted once a week for so many years, wondering where on earth all the dust came from,” (Joyce 20). Rather than cleaning the dust out of the house, Eveline allows the dust to collect. Eveline finds comfort in the dust because she has grown accustomed to it.

Early in the story, Joyce uses the yellowing photograph of her father’s old school friend as a warning to Eveline that those who leave inevitably disappoint her father. The man in the photograph had once been important to Eveline’s father; "He had been a school friend of her father. Whenever he showed the photograph to a visitor her father used to pass it with a casual word: 'He is in Melbourne now'." (Joyce 20), However, her father continues to keep the old photograph on the wall throughout the years; Eveline’s father has never moved on from the abandonment. Eveline “had never found out the name of the priest whose yellowing photograph hung on the wall above the broken harmonium..." (Joyce 20). She does not want to leave her father and become nothing but an unnamed, yellowing photograph on the wall. The thought of disappointing her father, however abusive and demanding he may be, “…she sometimes felt herself in danger of her father’s violence…latterly he had begun to threaten her and say what he would do to her only for her dead mother’s sake,” (Joyce 21), holds her back from becoming an independent young woman.

        The ship, which Eveline plans to escape with Frank on, signifies Eveline’s opportunity of escape.  Frank, a sailor, had “…tales of distant countries…He told her the names of the ships he had been on and the names of the different services. He had sailed through the Straights of Magellan and he told her stories of the terrible Patagonians,” (Joyce 22). He intrigues Eveline with tales of foreign places; Eveline, too, wants to experience new things on her own. Eveline “was to go away with him by the night-boat to be his wife and to live with him in Buenos Ayres where he had a home waiting for her,” (Joyce 21). She finally makes her own decision: she plans to sail away on the ship and relocate to a foreign place. Eveline has the chance at a new life—one that doesn’t involve the familiarity of her home. However, when the time comes to make a final decision and board the ship, “She felt her cheek pale and cold and, out of a maze of distress, she prayed to God to direct her, to show her what was her duty. The boat blew a long, mournful whistle into the mist,” (Joyce 23). Eveline, unable to go through with her plan, does not escape to Buenos Ayres with Frank. Although given the opportunity to leave her familiar and unchanging life, Eveline chooses not to step onto the ship. Instead, she sticks to what she has known her entire life.

Joyce’s symbolism in Eveline provides background to the hesitance she feels towards making her own decisions—particularly one decision that could drastically change her life, for better or for worse. Ultimately, Eveline chooses to stay behind while Frank leaves on the ship.. The symbolism of the dust, the old photograph, and the ship proves Eveline lacks the confidence and maturity she needs to strive on her own. As we grow from young adults into adults, the pressure to act like an adult—to take responsibility for ourselves and to make our own decisions—often frightens us. Like Eveline, we might restrict ourselves from the new because we fear unfamiliarity.  Joyce shows that the shift into adulthood is often frightening and new, but requires maturity and independence in order to be successful.